Undead X-men : Stage 2 - Rough pencils

First of all a big thanks to a user called Veritas71 over at penciljack.com who suggested the below change to my thumbnail . He really took it one step further, and it really feels like we're properly in a  grave now.

I also started my first rough pencil pass..it took me a while to get started because...it's hard..haha! No reference used...you could only really reference this by using a 3d package like Poser, but I'm only doing this to test my ability..no shortcuts!

I'll go in again for another round on Thursday most likely

I did quickly critique myself for some change that need to happen: