Trying a new method of working out idea. I usually write down ideas and flesh them out that way. This time I wanted to sketch some thumbnails while I was thinking.
For this story I have 2 angles, I don't know yet which one I like better:
1) A girl is running away from armed men chasing her, she goes down the sewer to hide from the men following her. The monster hiding down there is disturbed and starts taking everyone down one at a time, until he gets to her. At this point she opens her helmet. And it's revealed she is like him; a mutated girl. We hear more enforcers coming, and he needs to choose, will he leave/kill her or will he take her with him , since his home is now compromised.
2) A girl steals a data disk for a creature who's hiding in the sewers, the facility she teals it from was planning to use his data to generate similar experiments - without his consent (sound familiar? That's what AI does, but digital).
She doesn't realise she is being followed, and when the data enforcers (or something) show up, he feels betrayed by her and he disappears into the shadows leaving her alone to fend against these enforcers. She runs from the enforcers but eventually she is cornered, and they are about to unmask her (maybe to also steal her data profile). Now the creature has to choose, will he reveal himself to save her, or will he let her be taken ...
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