I finally gathered my strenght together and finished this layout with some rendering with a HB pencil. I think it could benifit from a heavier pencil on the train to create a bit more depth and contrast, but I easily can do the same by upping the levels in photoshop so why bother right? :D
Layout paper is such a crappy size, because it's just a little too big for my A4 scanner, so I had to scan this one in 6 pieces and paste em together in photoshop.
Funny enough I noticed how the individual pieces are quite interesting little compositions in their own right. So I posted them up aswell (untouched levels)
And then here the final results (upped the levels in photoshop)