Huge difference in the level of finish in this edit. But the pose doesnt really make sense to me, and its sad because your sketch looks awesome and its an interesting pose. But you always seem to change things when you do the lines lol. You should get out of that habit!
Haha, so you noticed aswell. I always fuck up when I change stuff :P I'm going to do jumping poses from next time onwards! Gotta make my work more exciting!