Headless Horseman WIP 2

I reworked the drawing a bit this evening, unfortunately the line quality clashes with the more sketchy version from yesterday, The idea is that the silhouette reads as a headless horseman, but his head is buried in between his shoulders.

I was also shading but I lost sight of the bigger picture

Overall I still hate this image, so I doodled another idea which I'll try and do tomorrow, just revamping the headless horseman to a headless Motorhead-cycling dude. It makes sense in my mind.